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Mandronette De Khyre

  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: A year and A Half

    I loved this. This was great i liked how it is in first person now and how you catch your characters personality in it. This is captivatin and i would ...

    May 23, 2009
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: June [2]

    I really think this is good. But if you could had made it a tad bit longer i would had loved it. I hope you keep writing more. p.s-There a ...

    May 23, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: I Need You To Write. - 1. Part 1.

    This as very good. The way u switched between present and paste didn't really go well with me though. But as whole this was great.

    May 23, 2009


Remember when dad's shoulders were the highest place on earth and your mom was your hero? Race issues were about who ran the fastest, war was only a car game. The most pain you felt was when you skinned your knees, and good byes only meant tomorrow? And we couldn't wait to grow up.
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